Screenplay Mistake

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JOSE MOURINHO

It is simple. You go to Barcelona

and terrorize their fans at their

stadium and leave a mark saying that

the special one has sent you.

CRISTIANO RONALDO

I am not sure about doing that sir.

The media could be all over me and

if I am caught I could be beaten

to death and you would lose a

great player, it would be a bad loss.

JOSE MOURINHO

I am the one that owns you, you

shall go. If you continue to

reject then Ozil will have to start.

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I believe I added too much in Cristiano Ronaldo's line. Only by having himself explain what the consequences could be. And too me, and not sure about others, it just doesn't sound right to me. I think it can be fixed by.. When Ronaldo leaves Mourinho's office, there is maybe someone else in the office whom was listening, maybe the assistant coach. By that, the assistant coach is the one explaining to Mourinho of the consequences and Mourinho doesn't change his mind about his decision. So, the assistant coach goes out and tries talking to Ronaldo, but neither does he change his mind because it's his job.